Please tell me what i should work on with these previews to 2 book ideas.
In The End
A zombie Apocalypse starts from no where (as far as the teens know), and while Aspen is in her literature class in high school. Not many people survive this out break, but the survivors must ban together to survive this hell. With death running right behind them, the survivors must not lose any body in the fight.
Broken Mineded
Crazy people are shunned and forgotten by the society, forcing them to move as far away from the cities as possible. Leaving no option, the crazy killers move to a forest. they forget their own pasts and become what they are B